Tuesday 1 August 2017

Fireman Saves a Kitten - Some Writing

Today Room 19 watched a video of a fireman saving a kitten from inside a house that had been on fire. We were quite worried about the kitten at the beginning but luckily it had a very happy ending. Here are the start of a few of our stories from today. We are hoping to add more ideas tomorrow.

I felt scared 'cos there was no oxygen. It was dangerous! Then the fireman saved the kitten. How he did it... He took the kitten outside and put a mask on the kitten. Then it could breath. Then it wiggled.
By Louis

Once upon a time there was a house that had a fire and they put it out. There was a cat in the fire. It looked like it was frozen. The fireman brang it outside and gave the cat a breathing mask and put some water on the cloth and put it on the cat.
By Alex

A fireman saves a kitten in a burnt house. The kitten was not breathing but the fireman helped it breathe again. He had to put water to cool it down and he put a mask on it. I felt happy because the kitten was alive and proud too. I think the fireman felt happy too!
By Gemma

A fireman saved a kitten from a burning house. The fireman gave CPR to the kitten with an oxygen mask to put air through the kitten. The fireman found the kitten on the ground.
By Addison

The fireman went into the house and he looked around. Then he saw the kitten. He picked up the kitten carefully and then he showed the other fireman. Then he took it out of the house and put water on the kitten because it needed to cool down. Then he put an oxygen mask on the kitten. The kitten shake then it meowed. Then the fireman hugged the kitten and everyone was happy.
By Blake

The fireman saves a cat. The house looked haunted. It looked spooky. It looked creepy. It looked dark. The cat as dead and it had a cool down and then it came alive again. He used an oxygen mask and the fireman picked the cat up carefully on the tail and the fireman showed it to the other fireman.
By Lachie

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